Wednesday, May 7, 2014

Please help me reword this?

Please help me reword this?
Im an a esl student and im orginally from poland and im doing my best but just need some help thanks I did an interview to get a little more incite on pediatric nursing. Patricia is 30 years old pediatric nurse she has 3 kids. Patricia says the best work of a nurse is to see that I help to improve the quality of life of children and its family. She have studied many years to specialize in this profession. She quotes “It has been somewhat difficult since there is so much time studying this practice.”She says the best thing about this job is to see how you save the lives of children. She is so thankful to see that the families are satisfied with my work. Patricia says she hates that she can't stay with her children during special moments because she always get call on her off days. She says it affects her a lot and it is necessary to be prepared for working long hours when you enter this type of work. She quotes “I have to dedicate myself and work long hours sometimes I don't have time to rest or spend with the family and that affects me emotionally” She works 12 hours weekly, If there is an emergency they call her at home to pick up extra hours.She applies the knowledge she learned in school to her work. She learned how to deal with people according to their situation. Patricia says It is necessary to have many skills in many areas like in emotional being strong in cases difficult like a death supporting and to give to hope to the families and patients, also taking decisions that are difficult in short time She says in this profession one must be careful and take care of the well-being of the patient. She makes about $1500 dollars more or less a month depending on if she works part or full time. She says the good aspects of being a nurse is to see kids and their families happy. The bad aspect is not having a long time to rest and not to being with my family on the holidays. Patricia says when she see those ill children and everything that happens gets her worry as I have children and I hope that they do have to suffer like the children that I take care of.
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i did an interview to get a little more insight on pediatric nursing. Patricia is a 30 year old pediatric nurse with 3 children. She says the best part of her work is helping to improve the quality of the life of children and their families.. She studied for many years to specialize in this profession. She says “It has been somewhat difficult since it took so much time studying". She says the best thing about this job is saving the lives of children. She is so thankful to know families are satisfied with her work. Patricia says she hates leaving her own children during special moments because she always get called in on her days-off. She says it affects her a lot but it is necessary to be prepared to work long hours when you enter this type of work. She says “I have to dedicate myself and work long hours. Sometimes I don't have time to rest or to spend with the family and that affects me emotionally” She works 12 (???) hours weekly, If there is an emergency they call her at home to pick up extra hours. She applies the knowledge she learned in school to her work. She learned how to deal with people according to their situation. Patricia says It is necessary to have many skills in many areas. Having emotional strength in difficult cases like a death, supporting and counselling the families and patients, and making difficult decisions at short notice. She says in this profession one must be careful and take care of the well-being of the patient. She makes about $1500 dollars more or less a month depending on if she works part or full time. She says the good aspects of being a nurse is seeing kids and their families happy. The bad aspect is not having a long time to rest and not being with my family on the holidays. Patricia says "when I see ill children and everything that happens it makes me worry as I have children and I hope that they do not have to suffer like the children that I take care of".

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